Tolong dikoreksi kak ini sudah benar belum ?

She is the smartest student in my class.
She has straight hair, black little eyes, and white skin.
She has a slim, short body.
She is special.
She is young and lovely.
She likes to eat fried rice and ice cream.
She is the second child from three children.
She lives in Situbondo, Jawa Timur.
Her weight is 40 kg and her height is 150 cm.

Mungkin itu saja koreksinya, semoga membantu, maaf bila ada kesalahan.